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Thursday, June 16, 2005

girl . boy.

they were getting married in the city registry, the one with the drab civil service chipboard walls and the pale peeling blue paint. the one with the tired floral arch with cardboard hearts and the word "Love" and whatever letters remaining of the original sentence above the desk.

he wore a black shirt and black trousers, a belt with a shiny buckle and leather shoes. he looked like he was on his first holiday job as a salesman at the neighbourhood mall. she wore a huge checkered maternity dress and looked even younger than that.

they took a number. they sat. they walked up to the counter when their number was called. they sat again. they answered questions. they said yes.


the baby-faced bride with the tribal tattoo crawling out the top of her maternity dress and up her neck. she pushed his head with a finger, playfully, with the hand that had the scorpion wrapped around the back. she smiled and smiled and smiled.

3 Comments:

  • "she smiled and smiled and smiled."
    can you explain this?
    whats the hidden meaning?
    why focus only on the girl in the last para?
    what about the boy?

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at Thursday, June 16, 2005 9:13:00 PM  

  • the boy is nothing, colourless, unimpressive. the girl she is many things at once, a child, a woman, a mother, about to be wife, an individual, a suggestion of danger, an optimistic outlook.

    and knowing me, a foreshadowing of disappointment.

    By Blogger pure, at Thursday, June 16, 2005 11:31:00 PM  

  • optimistic outlook.
    she's optimistic because she chose to. its a matter of choice.

    and you, truly a disappointment. you've given up on yourself. and thats a matter of choice. but hey, its your life man, we dont have a say. or do we have as friends?

    i admired the girl, maybe its her innocence or plain naivety, at least she's smiling, pure felicity. Though to some snobs, they may rather the girl commit suicide then to live on under such tough conditions.

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at Friday, June 17, 2005 12:59:00 AM  

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